2012년 1월 10일 화요일

Snack war in the GLPS

   -The GLPS students, who carried cigarretes here, were the start of the end of human civilizations.

   The students, who are prosecuted smoking, made the situation worse. They didn't tell their names, and it exacerbated the situation. All of them got 2 red cards. Each of them said,
      "You did a good job! Because of you, we cannot receive any prizes!"
   When they went back to the dormitory, one of the roommates said, 
      " Look here! I ate awesome ants! What delicious ants they were! Come here, and eat some of them".
"Wait! I have an idea to revenge to PAs! Why don't you guys deal with ants?" "What? They are just little monsters!" However, they had to. They had a deal with the ants. When the ants occupy the Korean Minjok Leadership Academy, the guys would give them 3 boxes of cookies. However, the ants wanted them more cookies, and they planned to defeat every people.
      The next day, 10 trillion ants appeared in the Chung-Mu building. The people surprised, however soon later, they screamed because the ants occupied the people. They started to eat them. Soon, The Asia, Europe, America continents, Africa were occupied. Now there is only Australia where the people survived.
      "Now we are the ants, and now they are the people! They'll kill us soon! There is no peace! We have to make a decision! Surrender for our free, or killed."
      Yeah, their prediction was correct. Even a rapper said that the people would be disappeared soon....We cannot enjoy any sports anymore. The ancient Maya civilization was correct. In 2012, the people disappeared in the world as they predicted the people civilization disappeared.
     

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  1. Two grammar points:
    "The people surprised
    The people were surprised.

    "where the people survived"
    where the people have survived.

    Also, use spell check.

    When I was young, my father watched a movie about army ants attacking a village. I watched some of it and woke in the night screaming about the ants chasing me. I know ants help clean up food garbage but still I don't like them.

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